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Sue Dean's avatar

I really liked this story. I think it would make a great starting point, with Jamie as a canine cop.

Barbara Harrison's avatar

Great story. I would give it a five. In fact, I just dropped the review on Amazon.

Dorthy Jamieson's avatar

Just read about Jamie and Duke. Could not stop reading until the end. Future Jamie stories would be fun to read.

Allison Brennan's avatar

Thank you! I really enjoyed these characters. Maybe if I have another short story to write, I can see where they are in their lives!

Kay Bates's avatar

I usually don't like short stories but loved Jamie and Duke. I hope you revisit them in the future. Thanks for sharing.

Vickie Watts's avatar

I really enjoyed the story and would like to see Jamie again in the future. I think she would make a great detective!

Rhonda's avatar

Really liked this! Had a lot going for a short story. Would be interesting to see what Jamie is up to years later :)

Allison Brennan's avatar

Thank you! I loved the story and maybe some day I'll write a follow-up :)

Patricia Lubeck's avatar

What a gripping story, the tension with Jamie and Duke kept me on edge the whole way through.